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September 8, 2006
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:iconpyrohmstr:
I think this is the final outfit for her
i got all the jewlery done
and the cloths

hmmmm.....not much to say i guess
i worked my ass off on this!!!!! I demand comments !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
>^.^<
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:iconze-man:
it great
but if you want to make it look more like ther character is suposed to look i think:

the forhead should be higher, the muzel is smaller, the eyes larger and defined with the dark outline around the eye lashes and the eye brows, her breasts to be a bit larger, her shoulders broader, the needs to be a bit more stacky, the gold should be more gold than yellow, and the white fur should be blended with the blue and more shaded.

but other that im quite amazed tis far better than what i can do, and i will give u 2 thumbs up. good job.

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*pyrohmstr Mar 24, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is two years old....i have no plans on going back to it....

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ahh
well i figured you would
still its prety good

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*pyrohmstr Mar 24, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks ^^ didn't mean for that to sound like i was jumping down your throat or anything...^^;

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:iconmimer10:
its not bad, i cant do it...i think
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*pyrohmstr Apr 1, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks ^^ if you do try to do it and want some help feel free to ask >^.^<

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:iconlinkman428:
u want a comment ill give ya one. ;)

1st-she does need some more meat on her pretty much everywhere
2nd-her legs need to be plumped up a little more even if u add some thickness overall (not like the insane inflation pics and stuff...though sometimes it looks good...back to the point)
3rd-boobs=a LOT bigger (again not insane but big)
4th-her tail could be a little longer (from what im seeing it short by about 6 inches to a foot, at most)
5th-(i think this is last) her nose/snout...thing...needs to be about half the length of what it is now
6th-oh and maybe kind of squish her head together more and make her eyes closer

i think that should be good then! ^^; im a little bit of a perfectionist when it comes to details but its still pretty good!!
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*pyrohmstr Jan 31, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
meh...i dont use that program anymore....so it seems this is the final version...

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:iconlinkman428:
ah well, IF u ever do again those are my thoughts!
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:iconayama-chan:
Wonderful. See, now dosen't htat look sooooooooo much better. I'll fav this :+favlove:

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